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Change: with too much time on his hands, an endless supply of bricks, and no one checking up on his activitiesnefarious unchecked...activities... ...has unleashedconstructed a hideous monstrosity that now rises from the sea of bricks and turns violently upon hisits unsuspecting binmates. "Figheads good!
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Change: vaguely familiar face. "Did you hear something? I didn't hear nothin'." Los Ammos, New Mechsico My entry in the March 2008 "Transformer" challenge: The Fort Brixbee supply wagon comes rolling into Doomstone... “Say Festus, that ain't you a-clankin' and a-buzzin' is it?” “Whoa! Hold them hosses!
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Change: is good! Crunchy on outside, chewy on inside!" Naturally, the general populace completely freaks. Total... ...chaos... ...ensues. Some braver souls fight back... ...as best they can... ...for what it's worth. The more resourceful make it to safety. Others are not so lucky. Many are trampled in the stampede. Even
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Change: ...to avoid ending up in the belly of the beast. Supes joins the fray... ...as does the Lantern... ...and another familiar face. "Did you hear something? I didn't hear nothin'." Los Ammos, New Mechsico My entry in the March 2008 "Transformer" challenge: The Fort Brixbee supply
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Change: Even Mr. Kringle shoves innocents aside in the panic. A few stop to help their confederates. Others stick strictly to business. Los Ammos, New Mechsico My entry in the March 2008 "Transformer" challenge: The Fort Brixbee supply wagon comes rolling into Doomstone... “Say Festus, that ain't you a-clankin'
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Change: hideous monstrosity upon thehis bin.binmates. "Figheads is good! Crunchy on outside, chewy on inside!" Naturally, the general populace panics. Los Ammos, New Mechsico My entry in the March 2008 "Transformer" challenge: The Fort Brixbee supply wagon comes rolling into Doomstone... “Say Festus, that ain't you a-clankin'
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Change: "Figheads is good! Crunchy on outside, chewy on inside!" Naturally, the general populace panics. Los Ammos, New Mechsico My entry in the March 2008 "Transformer" challenge: The Fort Brixbee supply wagon comes rolling into Doomstone... “Say Festus, that ain't you a-clankin' and a-buzzin' is it?” “Whoa! Hold
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Change: less-trustworthyless-than-trustworthy minifigs unmonitored: Los Ammos, New Mechsico My entry in the March 2008 "Transformer" challenge: The Fort Brixbee supply wagon comes rolling into Doomstone... “Say Festus, that ain't you a-clankin' and a-buzzin' is it?” “Whoa! Hold them hosses! There's somethin' a-twitter' back thar...” “Jumpin' Jee-hossafat!
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Change: An object lesson in the dangers of leaving large quantities of unsorted LEGOs unattended — and leaving your less-trustworthy minifigs unmonitored: Los Ammos, New Mechsico My entry in the March 2008 "Transformer" challenge: The Fort Brixbee supply wagon comes rolling into Doomstone... “Say Festus, that ain't you a-clankin'
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